Comprehensive Editing - Utah's Alcohol, Tobacco, and Other Drug Laws

Project Type: Newsletter

Skills: Editing, Audience Awareness, Design

Technology: MS Word


This newsletter, meant to explain Utah’s alcohol, drug, and tobacco laws, was originally confusing and challenging to use. I edited this newsletter for grammar and syntax issues, then restructured how it presented information.


I retargeted the newsletter towards incoming college students, using understandable language and bright design elements to maintain their attention throughout the full document.

Attribution:  "Utah Alcohol, Tobacco, and Other Drug Laws" document provided by Arizona State University.